Twenty Nine… too young to die

(Remembering Sergeant Ian McKay VC)

My son turned twenty-nine in 2011. So too did his best friend and namesake, who, during the late summer of that year, was serving with the RAF on a four month tour of the Falklands. They were both babes in arms at the time this story unfolded.

I was writing an e-Bluey to my son’s friend (that is the digital means of communicating with service men and women, around the world, by that organisation known as the BFPO – British Forces Post Office). In this I had written our news and inserted the first of my two article on the London riots, “London’s Burning…”. Whilst I was writing this, I remembered an event that led to a young Army Sergeant sacrificing his life to save others in the battle for Mount Longdon on 11th/12th June 1982. His heroic deed that night lead to his being posthumously awarded the Victoria Cross; the highest military award for gallantry. His very moving story is told here.

The fact that I worked for a few years with his younger brother, and therefore came to hear about Ian’s fate through him, makes this story resonate more powerfully; as does the fact that my son and his best friend this year turned twenty-nine years of age, the same age that Ian McKay was when he died. That the Falklands war, short as it was, began and ended twenty-nine years ago is coincidental, albeit a little spooky. So at the time of Ian McKay’s death, the Falklands war was at its height and shortly after came to a conclusion. For the two and a half months of its duration from April to June of that year, it almost completely took over the news.

This combination of facts and memories are responsible for the poem, which, I think was accompanied by more than my usual degree of feeling on the subject. I still find it hard to read without choking a little, even when I was still focussed on constructing it.

For poets, who may be interested, the poetic structure and rhyming scheme were chosen deliberately, being strongly influenced by Alfred Lord Tennyson’s epic elegy “In Memoriam A.H.H.”, which was written in four line stanzas, with a rhyming scheme ABBA, throughout its length. Incidentally, “In Memoriam” comprised of one hundred and thirty-three separate sections, each of which contained anything from three to thirty stanzas; well over two thousand lines; phenomenal! Whilst we are in the mood for coinciding numbers, it has to be said, the seventeen stanzas in my poem took less than seventeen hours to write, but, whilst it is neat, it is not associated with the seventeen years it took Alfred Lord Tennyson to complete “In Memoriam”, which was first published in 1850. The title of the poem chose itself before I started writing it. It was originally “At Twenty Nine”, reflecting the age at which Ian McKay was killed. I shortened it because it had a better feel that way.

It is clear that the number twenty-nine is significant on several fronts.

I hope you enjoy reading this poem

1 Response to Twenty Nine… too young to die

  1. David King says:

    A very fine poem indeed. The choice of Tennyson’s poem for the rhyme and structure was well founded, and those things which you brought to it, inspirational. A thoroughly enjoyable read.notwithstanding the subject matter.


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